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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 10. 26 조회 12830

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작성자: 72977 담당 튜터: Wynston2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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I've learned the guitar for 2months in a school. Every monday i go to that classroom to practive the guitar.
That's why i hurt my left fingers.
After 2 months later, i could (will) be a good guitar player.
And also i'm studying English pronoucation. It teach me how to pronouce English the vowl sounds.
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I've learned the guitar for 2months in a school. Every monday i go to that classroom to practive the guitar. That's why i hurt my left fingers. After 2 months later, i could (will) be a good guitar player. And also i'm studying English pronoucation. It teach me how to pronouce English the vowl sounds.

HI BART ... WE'LL REVIEW THIS TOGETHER AT OUR NEXT CLASS.

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