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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I've learned the guitar for 2months in a school. Every monday i go to that classroom to practive the guitar.
That's why i hurt my left fingers.
After 2 months later, i could (will) be a good guitar player.
And also i'm studying English pronoucation. It teach me how to pronouce English the vowl sounds.
That's why i hurt my left fingers.
After 2 months later, i could (will) be a good guitar player.
And also i'm studying English pronoucation. It teach me how to pronouce English the vowl sounds.
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