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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 10. 26 조회 12898

police officer

작성자: 1100048821 담당 튜터: Jasmine2
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As long as I remember, the police in my country is familiar with us. Because they are locating near us, they often says they are within 3minutes distances. They usually wear blue shirt and white hat in, it looks confident. Their main role is secure the safety of the community. So it's common scene that they are patrolling aroung the community with their patrol car. In the past it was usual that policeman is in the center of crossing road for making a sign to the cars. But it is not usual these day, because the registered taxi driver called Best Drivers are currentrly substitute the traffic police officer.
Sometime, I can see the police office who are on the auto bycle for escorting important person such as president or embassadar
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As long as I remember, the police in my country were familiar with us. Because they are located near us, they often say they're within 3minutes away. They usually wear a blue shirt and white hat in, it looks confident. Their main role is to secure the safety of the community. So it's common to see them that they are patrolling around the community with their patrol car. In the past it was usual that policeman were in the center of intersections to guide the cars crossing road for making a sign to the cars. But it is not usual these days because the registered taxi driver called Best Drivers are currently substituting for the traffic police officers. Sometimes, I can see a police officer who is on an auto bicycle to escort an important person such as the president or an ambassador.

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