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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 10. 28 조회 13160

Thinking after reporting to the management (1/2)

작성자: pos601974 담당 튜터: Mary1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I reported the result of technical due diligence regarding the nickel mine in Indonesia to the vice president, Mr. Yoo. I prepared for the report almost during two weeks, so I was a bit confident for explaining the result of the due diligence to him. His response was not bad. But he pointed out various things that I didn’t expect while preparing for the report.

Actually, whenever my boss was corrected by the vice president when my boss reported to him, I couldn’t understand why he didn’t prepare well and didn’t expect to make up for those important points the vice president mentioned in advance. As a result, I became to look down my boss.

However, as I got similar response from the vice president while I reported to him, I realized that seeing and doing something are totally different. So it would be better for me not to judge something in advance unless I have done it or have experience about it.
튜터 교정 답변

I reported the result of technical due diligence regarding the nickel mine in Indonesia to the vice president, Mr. Yoo. I prepared for the report during most of two weeks, so I was a bit confident for explaining the result of the due diligence to him. His response was not bad. But he pointed out various things that I didn’t expect while preparing for the report. Actually, whenever my boss was corrected by the vice president when my boss reported to him, I couldn’t understand why he didn’t prepare well and didn’t expect to make up for those important points the vice president mentioned in advance. As a result, I began to look down on my boss. However, as I got similar responses from the vice president while I reported to him, I realized that seeing and doing something are totally different. So it would be better for me not to judge something in advance unless I have done it or have experience about it.

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