Thinking after reporting to the management (2/2)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When I look back on reporting of my boss, it is true that he tried so much to deliver what he wanted to say to the vice president as clear as possible with displaying various pictures, graphs, and data.
I get another opportunity to redeem me as showing the vice president how I improved and checked well what I had missed before. I may report the result of contract with the Indonesia branch of our company to the vice president sooner or later.
I remember Michael Jordan, a legendary NBA star player, said he tried not to make same mistakes and repaid everything he owed from the basketball game after his team had lost to the opponent team, and as a result, he got a big success.
As I recall his story, I’ll do my best to prepare well for the upcoming report and double-check what the vice president pointed out on the previous report when I had reported to him.
I get another opportunity to redeem me as showing the vice president how I improved and checked well what I had missed before. I may report the result of contract with the Indonesia branch of our company to the vice president sooner or later.
I remember Michael Jordan, a legendary NBA star player, said he tried not to make same mistakes and repaid everything he owed from the basketball game after his team had lost to the opponent team, and as a result, he got a big success.
As I recall his story, I’ll do my best to prepare well for the upcoming report and double-check what the vice president pointed out on the previous report when I had reported to him.
튜터 교정 답변
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