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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 10. 29 조회 13029

Role-Play : Home improvement project.

작성자: 1101009819 담당 튜터: Rose2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Q1) Now, I’m going to give you a situation and ask to act it out.
Let’s say that your windows at home is broken.
Call the repairman and ask some questions to fix it.

Hello, Is that repair shop? This is Terry Speaking.
I have a problem that my windows broken, because it was typhoon, yesterday.
So, I want to fix my windows as soon as possible.
That’s why calling to you.
Can you come to my home, right now? you can do? That’s great!
How long does it take you to come to my house? It is located at Samsung apartment in Gangnam.
two hour? ok, I see.
How much is about fix windows? two hundred? It’s very expensive.
That’s right. you know? I have a VIP membership card for your store.
Can I get a discount? or Can I accumulate point? twenty% discount! wow~ That’s good sound!!
튜터 교정 답변

Q1) Now, I’m going to give you a situation and ask to act it out. Let’s say that your windows at home are broken. Call the repairman and ask some questions to fix it. Hello, Is this a repair shop? My name is Terry. I have a problem, my windows at home are broken because of the typhoon yesterday. So, I want my windows to be fixed as soon as possible. That’s why I called you to ask for your help. Can you come to my house today and fix it for me? It will be great! How long will it take you to come to my house? It is located in Samsung apartment in Gangnam. Two hours? ok, I see. How much do you think it will cost me? two hundred? It’s very expensive. That’s right. I have a VIP membership card of your store. Can I get a discount? or Will I accumulate some points? twenty% discount! wow~ That’s sounds good!!

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