Introduction myself
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Let me introduce myself.
My name is Kyehwa Jeong. My English name is Monica, my baptismal name.
I work for Hanwha Total as a trading manager. I am handling Gasoline.
I've been working for 10 years. I am satisfied with my job and conditions.
There are 6 people in my family, my husband, 2 kids, and my parents. My parents take care of my kids, as I'm a working mom. I live in Seoul. My hobby is hiking, walking, swimming, reading books, watching movies, performance and concerts and so on. But, I usually spend my time with my kids when I have free time. Recently, I try to study English as I have to take OPiC test in November. I took Opic 3 years ago. My score was IM2. But for this time, I have to get over IH level. That's why I signed up for this class. I expect this class will be very helpful to get better grade for the coming OpiC.
Thank you for paying attention to my instroction.
I look forward to talking with you over the phone Tuesday.
See you then.
My name is Kyehwa Jeong. My English name is Monica, my baptismal name.
I work for Hanwha Total as a trading manager. I am handling Gasoline.
I've been working for 10 years. I am satisfied with my job and conditions.
There are 6 people in my family, my husband, 2 kids, and my parents. My parents take care of my kids, as I'm a working mom. I live in Seoul. My hobby is hiking, walking, swimming, reading books, watching movies, performance and concerts and so on. But, I usually spend my time with my kids when I have free time. Recently, I try to study English as I have to take OPiC test in November. I took Opic 3 years ago. My score was IM2. But for this time, I have to get over IH level. That's why I signed up for this class. I expect this class will be very helpful to get better grade for the coming OpiC.
Thank you for paying attention to my instroction.
I look forward to talking with you over the phone Tuesday.
See you then.
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