Travelng Abroad
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학생 제출 원문
Ok, I tell you about things I bring when I travel abroad.
There are two type of travel for me.
The first is that I travel abroad with my family.
When I travel with them, I make sure to bring a selfie stick, instant cup ramen,
and several casual dress.
To take a photo with my family without the help of others,
a selfie stick is a must-have item.
During the trip, my wife and two sons want to have korean style food,
so I need to prepare for instant cup ramens
The second is that I go on a business trip abroad.
Then, I make sure to bring a business suit, cosmetics,
and dental hygiene products such as tooth brush, tooth paste
When I go on a business trip, I always have a meeting with my customer or business partner.
So, I had better wear a business suit.
Also, I usually stay in the hotel but sometimes there are not dental hygiene products
and cosmetics in hotel.
So I always make sure to bring them.
That's all.
There are two type of travel for me.
The first is that I travel abroad with my family.
When I travel with them, I make sure to bring a selfie stick, instant cup ramen,
and several casual dress.
To take a photo with my family without the help of others,
a selfie stick is a must-have item.
During the trip, my wife and two sons want to have korean style food,
so I need to prepare for instant cup ramens
The second is that I go on a business trip abroad.
Then, I make sure to bring a business suit, cosmetics,
and dental hygiene products such as tooth brush, tooth paste
When I go on a business trip, I always have a meeting with my customer or business partner.
So, I had better wear a business suit.
Also, I usually stay in the hotel but sometimes there are not dental hygiene products
and cosmetics in hotel.
So I always make sure to bring them.
That's all.
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