Self introdution.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, there.
My name is Han Kwon-tak.
I'm a 37 year-old male.
I'm a very positive person and like interacting with people.
As for my hobbies, I like to collect animation figures, make model railways.
I've got married seven years ago and I have two children.
My name is Han Kwon-tak.
I'm a 37 year-old male.
I'm a very positive person and like interacting with people.
As for my hobbies, I like to collect animation figures, make model railways.
I've got married seven years ago and I have two children.
튜터 교정 답변
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