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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 11. 06 조회 13120

My hobby

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My hobby is cooking, tasting and travelling.
I especially like Thai food because of a fragrant spice taste which I can't find from other's food. Sometime, I want to go Thai due to food. Fortunately, there are Thai food restaurant in Itawon, Korea, I can eat spicy Thai food whenever I want. I don't need to stick to formality in Thai restaurant, so it is comfortable, I like cooking show too.
I have travelled over 20 countries, through the travelling, I could learn about other countries and people, taste foreign food, and moreover exotically beautiful scenery makes me to travel abroad. About 15years ago, when I went to the Finland, I had chance to board on a big cruse from Helsinki to Stenholm, my cruse sailed all over night, we danced in the dance hall, drank in the bar etc...Most of all, I could enjoy the white night on deck which I saw only through the movie or book. It was fantastic I can't forget that memory.
I travel in historical place with my daughters and history teacher
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My hobby is cooking, tasting and travelling. I especially like Thai food because of a fragrant spice taste which I can't find from in other's food. Sometime, I want to go to Thailand due to the food. Fortunately, there are Thai food restaurants in Itawon, Korea, I can eat spicy Thai food whenever I want. I don't need to stick to formality in Thai restaurants, so it is comfortable, I like cooking shows too. I have travelled to over 20 countries, through the travelling, I could can learn about other countries and people, taste foreign food, and moreover see exotically beautiful scenery that makes me want to travel abroad. About 15years ago, when I went to the Finland, I had a chance to board on a big cruse from Helsinki to Stenholm, my cruse sailed all over night, we danced in the dance hall, drank in the bar etc...Most of all, I could enjoy the white night on deck which I saw had seen or had experienced only through the movie or book. It was fantastic I can't forget that memory. I travel in to historical places with my daughters and their history teacher

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