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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 11. 10 조회 13253

Hospital

작성자: 70950 담당 튜터: Faith
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OK, I tell you about that I had been to the hospital this year.

I have to have a regular medical checkup once a year.
So, I went to the hospital for having a medical checkup with my wife.

A medical checkup is very expensive and I think it's cost is more 1,000 $
But My company support all expenses including my wife's cost.

I had have several cavities and had cured them a long time ago.
So, as the last process of medical checkup, I always visit the dentist

This year, My wife and I both result of medical checkup were very good.
In other words, There were no problems. So we were very happy.

As we get older, We have more and more interest in our health.
For my health, I have often worked out 3 or 4 times a week.

that's all.
튜터 교정 답변

OK, I will tell you  that I had been to the hospital this year. I have to have a regular medical check-up once a year. So, I went to the hospital for a medical check-up with my wife. A medical check-up is very expensive and I think it's cost is more than $1,000 . But my company pays all expenses including my wife's cost. I had several cavities and had cured them a long time ago. So, as the last process of medical check-up, I always visit the dentist.This year, my wife and I result's of medical chec-up were very good. In other words, there were no problems. So we were very happy. As we get older, We are more and more interested in our health. For my health, I  often work out  at least 3 or 4 times a week. that's all.

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