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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 11. 13 조회 13330

Singing in a group 2

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As I mentioned yesterday, I became interested in guitar when I was in middle school.
The reason why i interested in guitar was that I loved guitarist Jimmy Page
who was a member of Led Jepplin.

Since I began to learn guitar, I loved playing guitar and singing.

When I was in high school, I met a new friend who was able to play guitar very well.
So, We played guitar and sang song together.

We had tried to take part in the singing contest" but we didn't do it.
But It was a really happy time to me.

I sometimes remember at that time.
튜터 교정 답변

As I mentioned yesterday, I became interested in playing the guitar when I was in middle school. The reason why I got interested in playing the guitar was that I loved a guitarist named Jimmy Page who was a member of Led Jepplin. Since, I began to learn how to play the guitar, I loved playing it and singing. When I was in high school, I met a new friend who was able to play guitar very well. So, We played guitar and sang songs together. We had tried to take part in the singing contest" but we didn't do it. But It was a really happy time to me. I sometimes remember that time.

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