City Life 3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Ok, I tell you about thing I did last weekend.
On Saturday, I went a korean restaurant with my wife and we had good lunch.
After lunch, we went a cafe that is a Paul Bassett coffee chain.
Paul Bassett is a man who is an australian world champion barista and
Paul Bassett coffee shop has been opened in korea four years ago.
There is a my wife's favorite coffee in there, so we go there every weekend.
On Sunday, We went to watch movie which is a korean movie and the title is "inside Men".
It is the story of an public prosecutor and an gangster.
The movie was a biting satire on the political corruption.
The movie beguns cruel scenes and I was a little afraid.
But, Overall, The story was exciting and the movie showed us that
justice won a political corruption.
We watched movie pleasantly and we can recommend this movie to others
Anyway, My wife and I both was very pleasant and happy for last weekend.
That's all
On Saturday, I went a korean restaurant with my wife and we had good lunch.
After lunch, we went a cafe that is a Paul Bassett coffee chain.
Paul Bassett is a man who is an australian world champion barista and
Paul Bassett coffee shop has been opened in korea four years ago.
There is a my wife's favorite coffee in there, so we go there every weekend.
On Sunday, We went to watch movie which is a korean movie and the title is "inside Men".
It is the story of an public prosecutor and an gangster.
The movie was a biting satire on the political corruption.
The movie beguns cruel scenes and I was a little afraid.
But, Overall, The story was exciting and the movie showed us that
justice won a political corruption.
We watched movie pleasantly and we can recommend this movie to others
Anyway, My wife and I both was very pleasant and happy for last weekend.
That's all
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