How have shopping trends changed over time?
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I think the shopping trends have changed a lot over time with advance technology.
In the past, we must go to a shopping center or a store to buy something at day time, beside we had no enough information about it.
But nowadays we don't need to go to the store; we can get the stuff over the internet, the TV or even a Smartphone at any time. Moreover we can search the product’s information fully before buying, find reasonable prices as comparing the price of divers online shopping centers through the internet.
All in all, nowadays shopping is more convenient compared to the past.
We don’t need to be restricted by time or space, and get more information not only producer but also purchaser.
In the past, we must go to a shopping center or a store to buy something at day time, beside we had no enough information about it.
But nowadays we don't need to go to the store; we can get the stuff over the internet, the TV or even a Smartphone at any time. Moreover we can search the product’s information fully before buying, find reasonable prices as comparing the price of divers online shopping centers through the internet.
All in all, nowadays shopping is more convenient compared to the past.
We don’t need to be restricted by time or space, and get more information not only producer but also purchaser.
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