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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 12. 01 조회 12441

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작성자: 1102047346 담당 튜터: Kendra1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I have to save almost my salary at the bank.

Some people told me that I would feel lonely.
My parents were friendly to me.
Until 13 years old, I begged them to make a sibling.
I thought being an only child would be better than having a sibling.

I could see mold everywhere on the wall.
I decided to change wall paper.
At the beginning, I headed to home depot to get home improvement items.
I removed the wall paper and scrapped off the mold.
I put the wall paper on the wall.
I had to change the wall paper of the ceiling.
It was risky, because I needed to be on the ladder.
I lost my balance when I was on the ladder.
I fell on the floor and twisted my ankle.
I knocked down the paint bucket on the floor.
The paint made the floor dirty.
It was painful, and I felt like I was at the end of the world.
Fortunately, there were all of my family members.
They helped with cleaning.
It took just 20mins.
Ever since, I be careful when I’m on the ladder or go down the ladder.
튜터 교정 답변

I have to save my WHOLE salary at the bank. Some people told me that I would feel lonely. My parents ARE friendly to me. Until I WAS 13 years old, I begged them to GIVE ME a sibling. I thought being an only child would be better than having a sibling. I could see mold everywhere on the wall. I decided to change THE wallpaper. At the beginning, I headed to home depot to get SOME home improvement items. I removed the wall paper and scrapped off the mold. I put the wallpaper on the wall. I had to change the wallpaper of the ceiling. It was risky, because I needed to be on the ladder. I lost my balance when I was on the ladder. I fell on the floor and twisted my ankle. I knocked down the bucket OF PAINT on the floor. The paint made the floor dirty. It was painful, and I felt like I was at the end of the world. Fortunately, all of my family members WERE THERE. They helped with THE cleaning. It took just 20mins. Ever since, I WAS BEING careful when I’m CLIMBING on the ladder or TO go down the ladder.

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