heavily snowing
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It was snowing heavily this morning.
I usually get to my office by driving my car but today it was too scary to drive.
I had to slow down my car on the highway.
It typically takes me about 30 min in the early moring to get there, but today 1 hour!
But I like snowing. Because I like skiing. When I was in my teens, I'd enjoyed skiing most weekends in winter. It gave me a chance to feel thrills from high speeds of adventures.
After having my kis, unfortunately I have not enough chance to enjoy skiing. Someday I'll go to ski with my famliy. We are going to have a happy time.
I usually get to my office by driving my car but today it was too scary to drive.
I had to slow down my car on the highway.
It typically takes me about 30 min in the early moring to get there, but today 1 hour!
But I like snowing. Because I like skiing. When I was in my teens, I'd enjoyed skiing most weekends in winter. It gave me a chance to feel thrills from high speeds of adventures.
After having my kis, unfortunately I have not enough chance to enjoy skiing. Someday I'll go to ski with my famliy. We are going to have a happy time.
튜터 교정 답변
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