목록으로 돌아가기
공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 12. 03 조회 13296

Hello.

작성자: 1100381314 담당 튜터: Harper2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello. Teacher.

First, I'm sorry i couln't attend last class because i got a baby.

After your call, my wife's condition was getting worse suddenly.

Even thouth It was very urgency she gave birth to my baby son.

And i had to stay at hospital for a while to care them.

Thanksfully, They have recovered very well.

So that i didn't read what you wrote last week.

Can you write one more what you asked me?

I remember you said about the afeerica TV service in south korea.

I will wait your reply soon.

Thank you.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello. Teacher. First, I'm sorry i couln't attend last class because i got a baby. After your call, my wife's condition was getting worse suddenly. Even thouth It was very urgency she gave birth to my baby son. And i had to stay at hospital for a while to care them. Thanksfully, They have recovered very well. So that i didn't read what you wrote last week. Can you write one more what you asked me? I remember you said about the afeerica TV service in south korea. I will wait your reply soon. Thank you.

 

 

Congratulations!  I am sorry for this late response.  I just saw this email when I came here today.  I was not here on Friday.

 

Here are the links I sent to you.  One is a video from an American news show, and the other is an article I read on line from a Korean, English version, newspaper:

http://www.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20151125001014


http://www.cbsnews.com/news/future-of-money-kenya-m-pesa-60-minutes/

Let me know if you are able to get them.

Best wishes to you and your wife!  Harper

 

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!