One day in winter season 2015
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
One day, I noticed that I think too much for everything. From small to big, unhappy to happy, I spend too much time for meaningless things to think about. Sometimes, it is helpful to think deeply before doing some important thing, however I am very sure it would be only less than 5% if I have to chose important things around me.
Especially, my past memory which has sorryness, regret, disappointment makes me crazy. Those memorise always comes to me when I go to bed and interrupt the way I fall in sleep. The worst case was I could fall in sleep until 3:30AM. Yesterday was also similar day as I mention above.
I believe I have to move on. I need to evicerate all my bad memory from my life so that I can put my energy for my better future. Time is so limited and I have responsibility not to use meaning less. Past is past and it will never ever come to me again. Therfore I have to get rid of it. I belive that will also help me for easy and cozy sleeping
Especially, my past memory which has sorryness, regret, disappointment makes me crazy. Those memorise always comes to me when I go to bed and interrupt the way I fall in sleep. The worst case was I could fall in sleep until 3:30AM. Yesterday was also similar day as I mention above.
I believe I have to move on. I need to evicerate all my bad memory from my life so that I can put my energy for my better future. Time is so limited and I have responsibility not to use meaning less. Past is past and it will never ever come to me again. Therfore I have to get rid of it. I belive that will also help me for easy and cozy sleeping
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