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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 01. 07 조회 15323

Thanks for calling me Jack

작성자: 1101983872 담당 튜터: Jeck
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I am very happy to join your class by the phone. It was good experience for me yesterday.
In my company, I have to use english for the general business which have T-conference with our global teammates and training our system to customers in oversea. So I want to improve my communication skill in english.I believe you can help me a lot.

In addition, my baby lives her grandma on weekdays. During every weekend, I can take care of her.
So I really miss her during the weeks.

Thank you.
튜터 교정 답변

I am very happy to join your class by the phone. It was good experience for me yesterday. In my company, I have to use english for the general business which have T-conference with our global teammates and training our system to customers in oversea. So I want to improve my communication skill in english.I believe you can help me a lot. In addition, my baby lives her grandma on weekdays. During every weekend, I can take care of her. So I really miss her during the weeks. Thank you.

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I am very happy to join your phone class. It was a good experience for me yesterday.
In my company, I have to use English for general business in which we use T-conference with our global teammates and teaching our system to the customers in overseas. So I want to improve my communication skills in English. I believe you can help me a lot.

In addition, my baby lives with her grandma on weekdays. During weekends, I can take care of her.
So I really miss her during weekdays.

Thank you.

( based on the conversation we had yesterday)

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