Please check my sentences gramatically(12.4)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I will go to other city after I finish work.
I take part in my coworker's wedding march tomorrow.
She made a reservation hotel rooms for her guests.
Since we drive a car to go there after work, I hope the road not frozen.
There are many things to do by using internet such as shopping, chatting and so on.
I prefer watching movie at home over going to the movie theater.
I didn't have enough time to stay at home while watching TV.
That's why I usually downloaded that files.
At that time, it needed long time to download them.
it took 3~4 hours to download each movie file.
I thought it was time consuming.
But I didn't have any choice but waiting for long time.
Because download speed was very slow.
I spent my whole day to download them.
Thanks to the advancement of technology, the download speed has been faster than past.
Speed is the biggest change between past and now.
I can't imagine the future how the internet speed would be faster than now.
I take part in my coworker's wedding march tomorrow.
She made a reservation hotel rooms for her guests.
Since we drive a car to go there after work, I hope the road not frozen.
There are many things to do by using internet such as shopping, chatting and so on.
I prefer watching movie at home over going to the movie theater.
I didn't have enough time to stay at home while watching TV.
That's why I usually downloaded that files.
At that time, it needed long time to download them.
it took 3~4 hours to download each movie file.
I thought it was time consuming.
But I didn't have any choice but waiting for long time.
Because download speed was very slow.
I spent my whole day to download them.
Thanks to the advancement of technology, the download speed has been faster than past.
Speed is the biggest change between past and now.
I can't imagine the future how the internet speed would be faster than now.
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