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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 12. 09 조회 13518

Please check my sentences gramatically(12.4)

작성자: 1102047346 담당 튜터: Kendra1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I will go to other city after I finish work.
I take part in my coworker's wedding march tomorrow.
She made a reservation hotel rooms for her guests.

Since we drive a car to go there after work, I hope the road not frozen.


There are many things to do by using internet such as shopping, chatting and so on.
I prefer watching movie at home over going to the movie theater.

I didn't have enough time to stay at home while watching TV.
That's why I usually downloaded that files.
At that time, it needed long time to download them.
it took 3~4 hours to download each movie file.
I thought it was time consuming.
But I didn't have any choice but waiting for long time.
Because download speed was very slow.
I spent my whole day to download them.
Thanks to the advancement of technology, the download speed has been faster than past.
Speed is the biggest change between past and now.
I can't imagine the future how the internet speed would be faster than now.
튜터 교정 답변

I will go to ANother city after I finish work. I WILL take part in my co-worker's wedding tomorrow. She made a reservation AT THE hotel for her guests. Since we WILL drive a car after work, I hope the road IS not frozen. There are many things to do by using internet such as shopping, chatting and so on. I WOULD prefer watching movie at home THAN going to the movie theater. I DON'T have enough time to stay at home TO WATCH TV. That's why I usually downloaded THOSE files. At that time, it DOESN'T NEED TO TAKE A long time to download them. IT took 3~4 hours to download each movie. I thought it was time consuming but I didn't have any choice but TO WAIT for A long time. SINCE download speed was very slow, I WOULD spent my whole day to download them. Thanks to the advancement of technology, the download speed has been faster than IN THE past. Speed is the biggest change between past and now. I can't imagine the future how the internet speed would be faster than now.

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