There is nothing to be contrite in our life
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
What is life? That is very abstract question. In this case, we should be simplify the question if it looks to complicated to answer. Of caouse, I can not answer it as simply as a question such as do you like apple or not.
For me, life is everything which shows all part of our feeling and memories. Happiness, reget, sorrow, failure, success and so on. Additionally, I personly believe life is able to be changed depending on what we do in every sigle moment. We are the hero who make our own destiny, therefore there is noting to be contrite in our life. It it better to focus on what we face now that to get stress due to our failure in the past.
For me, life is everything which shows all part of our feeling and memories. Happiness, reget, sorrow, failure, success and so on. Additionally, I personly believe life is able to be changed depending on what we do in every sigle moment. We are the hero who make our own destiny, therefore there is noting to be contrite in our life. It it better to focus on what we face now that to get stress due to our failure in the past.
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