Please check my sentences gramatically (12.10)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My company went through reorganization yesterday.
There are new departments, but some departments disappeared because of reorganization.
After toasting, I put down my cup on the table.
I don't like to have a seat next to heavy drinkers.
They prefer drinking soju to beer.
If someone is good at making mixture of beer and soju, he or she receives praise from seniors.
Most of my friends understand if I can't drink a lot.
I've been much better than yesterday.
Because I took a medicine and slept enough on my bed with hot mat.
Hot mat got warm my body.
Most important thing to feel better is to make our body warm.
He was not a direct teacher to me.
Even he didn't have any lessons for my class.
I can't remember exactly what I made a mistake to him.
Hitting someone can't be excuse anytime, anywhere.
I bursted out crying with my resentment.
I can't still undertand what he did to me.
After that, I try to be kind to someone who makes a mistake to me.
There are new departments, but some departments disappeared because of reorganization.
After toasting, I put down my cup on the table.
I don't like to have a seat next to heavy drinkers.
They prefer drinking soju to beer.
If someone is good at making mixture of beer and soju, he or she receives praise from seniors.
Most of my friends understand if I can't drink a lot.
I've been much better than yesterday.
Because I took a medicine and slept enough on my bed with hot mat.
Hot mat got warm my body.
Most important thing to feel better is to make our body warm.
He was not a direct teacher to me.
Even he didn't have any lessons for my class.
I can't remember exactly what I made a mistake to him.
Hitting someone can't be excuse anytime, anywhere.
I bursted out crying with my resentment.
I can't still undertand what he did to me.
After that, I try to be kind to someone who makes a mistake to me.
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