Helle, Cee. I need your help (2/4)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear Cee,
This is second part of my thesis.
plz check below.
ABSTRACT (2/4)
Even though the situation is like that, If the steel company of Korea give up overseas expansion, the steel industry in Korea shall be collapsed. Therefore, this moment should be time when the steel company should find new project structure for abroad steel making plant.
This research would like to deliver the new project structure, that is Tolling Model. Actually, Tolling Model is not familiar with Steel industry, but, Tolling Model is already general in the Oil & Gas Industry. Simply Tolling Model can be explained to the project structure has long term purchase agreement with Take-or-Pay condition. So, Tolling Model is appropriate for the variable market where exists commodity risk.
This is second part of my thesis.
plz check below.
ABSTRACT (2/4)
Even though the situation is like that, If the steel company of Korea give up overseas expansion, the steel industry in Korea shall be collapsed. Therefore, this moment should be time when the steel company should find new project structure for abroad steel making plant.
This research would like to deliver the new project structure, that is Tolling Model. Actually, Tolling Model is not familiar with Steel industry, but, Tolling Model is already general in the Oil & Gas Industry. Simply Tolling Model can be explained to the project structure has long term purchase agreement with Take-or-Pay condition. So, Tolling Model is appropriate for the variable market where exists commodity risk.
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