Top ten news in 2015 and ten wish lists in 2016 1/3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
This year is passing so fast and many things happened during whole year as before. In a time order, our family was glad my wife gave birth to our second child well on March. Personally, I studied hard and took TOEFL exam on April. I repaired damaged fenders and rear doors of my car. Our firstborn son started to go to a daycare center. I was promoted to a manager. And I was glad to bring my firstborn son to my office and show him a lighting man’s performance.
But I was tortured when Joseph stayed at the hospital for the trouble in his intestine. My wife has been suffering from her back pain, so she’s going to an acupuncture center. I would like to study abroad so I applied for a scholarship supported by the institution for Korea advanced education. I did my best, but I was rejected. On November, our family went to Jeju island and enjoy our vacation.
But I was tortured when Joseph stayed at the hospital for the trouble in his intestine. My wife has been suffering from her back pain, so she’s going to an acupuncture center. I would like to study abroad so I applied for a scholarship supported by the institution for Korea advanced education. I did my best, but I was rejected. On November, our family went to Jeju island and enjoy our vacation.
튜터 교정 답변
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