Top ten news in 2015 and ten wish lists in 2016 3/3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Finally, there’re wish lists for myself. I want to meet good mentor will guide me in a right path so that I will come true my dream and develop my potential abilities at the most.
Last, I wish to make a good balance between work and my family life. Even if I move to a raw material procurement department and have to learn various new works and information at my job, I wish to do my best so that I’ll contribute to my job with meaningful work results and accomplishments as having a good balance between my work and family.
Last, I wish to make a good balance between work and my family life. Even if I move to a raw material procurement department and have to learn various new works and information at my job, I wish to do my best so that I’ll contribute to my job with meaningful work results and accomplishments as having a good balance between my work and family.
튜터 교정 답변
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