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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 12. 30 조회 13678

How to make Bulgogi

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It is not too difficult to make it.
The first step in making Bulgogi is to buy the best part of beef tastes.
And you need to make a main sauces, which consists of soy sauce, sugar, rise wine.
After you have done those two steps, you have got to marinated beef in sauces for twenty-four hours.
During marinating it, you’d better prepare vegetable such as onion, carrot.
And you need to chop it into small pieces.
The final step is to Combine the beef and vegetable in a large bowl and burn it well.
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It is not too difficult to make it. The first step in making Bulgogi is to buy the best part of beef tastes. And you need to make the sauce which is made of soy sauce, sugar and rise wine. After you have done those two steps, you have to marinate the beef in sauce for twenty-four hours. While marinating it, you’d better prepare vegetable such as onion and carrot. And you need to chop it into small pieces. The final step is to combine the beef and vegetable in a large bowl and cook it well.

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