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Make a schedule for the next week's business trip

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Good morning. Here is your schedule for the next week’s business trip.
Your schedule is all booked up next week.
After arriving at 16:00 in Tokyo, you will have an important dinner with The Japan Publishers.
Then you will visit Book City and meet with 50 companies CEOs,
50 CEOs are looking forward to meet you.
The most important schedule is on Wednesday.
You will make a keynote speech at Publishing Association in Tokyo,
A keynote speech is the main purpose of this trip.
After then, you go to trip with Japanese clients with a light heart.
As you know, they set and have some plans for you without a particular purpose.
I want you feel relaxed when you with Japanese.
Everything will be done until Thursday and you will arrived at 15:00 on Friday in Seoul, Korea
And you will take a day off from Saturday to Sunday.
Thank you
튜터 교정 답변

Good morning. Here is your schedule for the next week’s business trip. Your schedule is all booked up next week. After arriving at 16:00 in Tokyo, you will have an important dinner with The Japan Publishers. Then you will visit Book City and meet with 50 companies CEOs, 50 CEOs are looking forward to meet you. The most important schedule is on Wednesday. You will make a keynote speech at Publishing Association in Tokyo, A keynote speech is the main purpose of this trip. After then, you go to trip with Japanese clients with a light heart. As you know, they set and have some plans for you without a particular purpose. I want you feel relaxed when you're with the Japanese. Everything will be done until Thursday and you will arrived at 15:00 on Friday in Seoul, Korea And you will take a day off from Saturday to Sunday. Thank you

 

 

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