Petition for Sustainable Development.
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For sustainable development, I want to make a few suggestions.
First, we should consider the environmental effect of the development when planning to develop some areas. If the effects cannot be recovered naturally, recovering costs should be included for the developing budget.
Second, global cooperation is needed for the success of the sustainable development. Many underdeveloped or developing countries are focusing on the development more than environment or preservation. So, developed countries support the sustainable development of underdeveloped or developing countries.
First, we should consider the environmental effect of the development when planning to develop some areas. If the effects cannot be recovered naturally, recovering costs should be included for the developing budget.
Second, global cooperation is needed for the success of the sustainable development. Many underdeveloped or developing countries are focusing on the development more than environment or preservation. So, developed countries support the sustainable development of underdeveloped or developing countries.
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