introducing myself
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi Lisa! I'm mj kim and i'm very happy to meet you in this class.
I work for samsung economics research institute as a researcher.
My major was psychology and my current research areas are human resource management and organizational culture.
In March, I'will start to study my doctural course, I think it's going to be a big challenge, because I have to go to work too.
The reason I have to study English is that there're lots of good opportunities for whom can communicate easily, and i'm expected a better position in my company.
well, i'm glad to talk to you again. I hope we have some fun during the classes.
Thank you!
I work for samsung economics research institute as a researcher.
My major was psychology and my current research areas are human resource management and organizational culture.
In March, I'will start to study my doctural course, I think it's going to be a big challenge, because I have to go to work too.
The reason I have to study English is that there're lots of good opportunities for whom can communicate easily, and i'm expected a better position in my company.
well, i'm glad to talk to you again. I hope we have some fun during the classes.
Thank you!
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