My favorite movie
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I'd like to tell you about my favorite movie.
My favorite movie genre is action and sie-fi movie.
I got into action movies when I was high school student.
Anyway, actually, recently I watched a movie that is Taken. Riam Neesen starred in the movie. He payed in a former CIA agent. Oneday, Bad guys kidnaped his daughter in Europe. And then he had to kill bad guys. At last he had to save his daughter from bad guys.
Thers are so many action scene in the movie. It blew me away. I was so impressed with the movie because of father's efford.
If there's any chance, I want to watch this movie again.
My favorite movie genre is action and sie-fi movie.
I got into action movies when I was high school student.
Anyway, actually, recently I watched a movie that is Taken. Riam Neesen starred in the movie. He payed in a former CIA agent. Oneday, Bad guys kidnaped his daughter in Europe. And then he had to kill bad guys. At last he had to save his daughter from bad guys.
Thers are so many action scene in the movie. It blew me away. I was so impressed with the movie because of father's efford.
If there's any chance, I want to watch this movie again.
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