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Please check my sentences gramatically (1.4)

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I don't have sufficient time to exercise.
I want to finish it within 2:40.

I have 2 best friends.
One is David. The other is Erica.
I met David when I was in middle school.
I thought he was a stuck-up person.
Because he didn't talk anything about himself.
At that time, I tried to make a good relationship with friends.
Even he looked like making a fense against friends including me.
However as it turns out, we had in common a lot such as getting into basketball and swimming.
Similar hobbies made us friendly.
I misunderstood him. He was just a reserved person.

Erica is my role model.
She is energetic and confident for everything.
I tried to be like her.
Moreover, she is meticulous. So, she always checks whether I forget my belongings.
Sometimes she lectures me.
I'm kind of person who is clumsy.
Therefore, I've learned many things from her.

It is too hard to talk who is better.
I love them exactly same.
They are my best friends forever.
튜터 교정 답변

I don't have sufficient time to exercise. I want to finish excercising within 2:40 ( specify, is this mintues, and seconds, or hours and minutes? etc). I have two ( you can only use a number sign when the number is 10 or greater) best friends. One's name is David, the other is Erica. I met David when I was in middle school. I thought he was a stuck-up person because he didn't talk about himself. At that time, I tried to make a good relationship with people. David made offense of people including myself. However; as it turned out, we had a lot in common like playing basketball and swimming. Similar hobbies made us friendly towards each other. I misunderstood him. He was just a reserved person. Erica is my role model. She is energetic, and confident in everything. I try to be like her, moreover she is meticulous she always checks whether I have forgotten my belongings. Sometimes she lectures me because I'm kind of a person who is clumsy. I've learned many things from her. It is too hard to say who is better because I love them exactly the same. They are my best friends forever.

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