Please check my sentences gramatically (1.4)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I don't have sufficient time to exercise.
I want to finish it within 2:40.
I have 2 best friends.
One is David. The other is Erica.
I met David when I was in middle school.
I thought he was a stuck-up person.
Because he didn't talk anything about himself.
At that time, I tried to make a good relationship with friends.
Even he looked like making a fense against friends including me.
However as it turns out, we had in common a lot such as getting into basketball and swimming.
Similar hobbies made us friendly.
I misunderstood him. He was just a reserved person.
Erica is my role model.
She is energetic and confident for everything.
I tried to be like her.
Moreover, she is meticulous. So, she always checks whether I forget my belongings.
Sometimes she lectures me.
I'm kind of person who is clumsy.
Therefore, I've learned many things from her.
It is too hard to talk who is better.
I love them exactly same.
They are my best friends forever.
I want to finish it within 2:40.
I have 2 best friends.
One is David. The other is Erica.
I met David when I was in middle school.
I thought he was a stuck-up person.
Because he didn't talk anything about himself.
At that time, I tried to make a good relationship with friends.
Even he looked like making a fense against friends including me.
However as it turns out, we had in common a lot such as getting into basketball and swimming.
Similar hobbies made us friendly.
I misunderstood him. He was just a reserved person.
Erica is my role model.
She is energetic and confident for everything.
I tried to be like her.
Moreover, she is meticulous. So, she always checks whether I forget my belongings.
Sometimes she lectures me.
I'm kind of person who is clumsy.
Therefore, I've learned many things from her.
It is too hard to talk who is better.
I love them exactly same.
They are my best friends forever.
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