What is right or wrong
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
In our life, we are facing many things which can not be discerned right or worng.
What would be your goal in your life? Would you be happy and satisfied yourself if you acheive top position in your company? Money and your position could make you feel good to somebody while some one has different minds.
General means just general, which means there are always exception. Moreover,it you say gerenally and traditionally you do someting, it couldn't accepted by someone. Depending your backgournd, circumstance, relationship, emotional feeling, answer could always be chnged.
That's why it is so complicated to discern what is right or wrong.
What would be your goal in your life? Would you be happy and satisfied yourself if you acheive top position in your company? Money and your position could make you feel good to somebody while some one has different minds.
General means just general, which means there are always exception. Moreover,it you say gerenally and traditionally you do someting, it couldn't accepted by someone. Depending your backgournd, circumstance, relationship, emotional feeling, answer could always be chnged.
That's why it is so complicated to discern what is right or wrong.
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