Korea's ancient constructions and building
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China is famous for its' long history and very large size of historic constructions.
Korean history has been long similarly to the Chinese history, but our constructions are smaller than the Chinese.
I think that the reason is related to the size of territory and the concept of the constructions.
Our land is smaller than china. So, our constructions is focusing more on the delication than the size.
Additionally, our ancestors considered about the burden of the people when making large size of palaces.
At the result, our constructions are small but, charming and sensuous.
Korean history has been long similarly to the Chinese history, but our constructions are smaller than the Chinese.
I think that the reason is related to the size of territory and the concept of the constructions.
Our land is smaller than china. So, our constructions is focusing more on the delication than the size.
Additionally, our ancestors considered about the burden of the people when making large size of palaces.
At the result, our constructions are small but, charming and sensuous.
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