Traveling abroad.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As you might know, I often go for a business trip and traveling abroad.
At that time, I take a lot of things when I go to abroad. Such as passport, some medicions and clothes.
First, passport is really importent. I have to carry everywhere. When I get a flight and to pass imegration checking, if I always have to possess, I can do it.
Second, I have an allergy to dust. So I make sure to bring some medicions.
Finaly, I take some clothes to change. I hard do the landray in the abroad. Thus I always bring enough clothes.
Whitout them, I won't be able to enjoy my traveling abroad.
At that time, I take a lot of things when I go to abroad. Such as passport, some medicions and clothes.
First, passport is really importent. I have to carry everywhere. When I get a flight and to pass imegration checking, if I always have to possess, I can do it.
Second, I have an allergy to dust. So I make sure to bring some medicions.
Finaly, I take some clothes to change. I hard do the landray in the abroad. Thus I always bring enough clothes.
Whitout them, I won't be able to enjoy my traveling abroad.
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