We had incessant snow last night
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It is not common to see snow where I live. If you see it more than 5 times a yaer, it would be lucky for you. However, we had snow last night. Interestingly it was snowing with bule sky.
You might have the feeling that makes you more emotionally than before especially when it is snowing. When I was young it happen all the time and somtimes it makes me more strong the way I express my feeling to somebody. One statisic shows that if you say I love you to somebody when it is snowing, the percentage of success reachs up to 90%. I wanted to be one of lucky guy, however, I had bad memory. It was snowing very much, the mood was romantic, everything looked just as perpact as I pexpected. Would you like to know last story? I blamed the snow which made me sorrow and depress because a girl who I liked did not accept my asking. There is always an exception. That is what I learned.
You might have the feeling that makes you more emotionally than before especially when it is snowing. When I was young it happen all the time and somtimes it makes me more strong the way I express my feeling to somebody. One statisic shows that if you say I love you to somebody when it is snowing, the percentage of success reachs up to 90%. I wanted to be one of lucky guy, however, I had bad memory. It was snowing very much, the mood was romantic, everything looked just as perpact as I pexpected. Would you like to know last story? I blamed the snow which made me sorrow and depress because a girl who I liked did not accept my asking. There is always an exception. That is what I learned.
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