Traditional holiday
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I'd like to tell you about Lunar new year's day as traditional holiday in my country.
Lunar holiday is pretty big traditional holiday in my country. First, At that time, Relatives gather togather at their hometown even thought they will be suffering from havy traffic. Second they prepare meals to eat togater. Such as rice-cake soup, half-moon-sharped rice-cake and so on. Woman are usually in charge of cooking, so they spend almost time in the kitchen all day. I'm afraid it. Finally, We play Yut. Yut is traditional board game in my country. Everyone can enjoy playing Yut which is really simple, easy and funny. In the Lunar new year's day, there is hard to gather familly because of not only very busy but also need a lot of momey. However, the day is pretty important and meaningful for Korean.
Lunar holiday is pretty big traditional holiday in my country. First, At that time, Relatives gather togather at their hometown even thought they will be suffering from havy traffic. Second they prepare meals to eat togater. Such as rice-cake soup, half-moon-sharped rice-cake and so on. Woman are usually in charge of cooking, so they spend almost time in the kitchen all day. I'm afraid it. Finally, We play Yut. Yut is traditional board game in my country. Everyone can enjoy playing Yut which is really simple, easy and funny. In the Lunar new year's day, there is hard to gather familly because of not only very busy but also need a lot of momey. However, the day is pretty important and meaningful for Korean.
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