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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 01. 23 조회 12903

Tomorrow's weather

작성자: 1401720 담당 튜터: Hunter1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi. Hunter.

How's your weekend going so far?

It is very freezing and windy here. Tomorrow will be the coldest day since 2001.

Regarding it, I wrote the sentences as follows:

<Draft>
It is freezing and windy these days.

Tomorrow will be the coldest day since 2001. The weather cast says that the low temperature will be eighteen below zero in the morning.

Therefore, I will stay home all day long tomorrow although some of my friends meet up near my home.
튜터 교정 답변

Yeah, this weekend there was supposed to be a winter storm in my city. It just rained a lot, and Saturday was very windy.

Too cold :(

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!