My brothers
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Believe or not, I have 3 brothers. Since I am the youngest, I had more chances to be the one who was beaten from other brothers. I sometimes got suprised by myslef because I can not understand how my brothers and me are so disparate each other eventhough we ware born from one mother.One anthropologist said that enviroment and circumstance could be the reason of diversity of human being. If it is ture, how can I explain my disparate brothers.
In the mean time, I miss that time when we were fight and cry each other. We were so close each other that we could feel everything without taliking. While, when we come togher in our parents house, we are not as funny or comportable as before. Sometimes we have to find suitable or preper topic which could fix everybody. I can not know what is the reason of this situation. Maybe as time gose by, we are tired of seeing very different people from any kinds of society.
In the mean time, I miss that time when we were fight and cry each other. We were so close each other that we could feel everything without taliking. While, when we come togher in our parents house, we are not as funny or comportable as before. Sometimes we have to find suitable or preper topic which could fix everybody. I can not know what is the reason of this situation. Maybe as time gose by, we are tired of seeing very different people from any kinds of society.
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