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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 01. 25 조회 13935

Medical Checkup

작성자: 87316 담당 튜터: Sheryl
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Actually, I'v been too busy to sleep. I worked like hell lately. And then I had eyeache so much a couple weeks ago. So I went see an eye doctor. The doctor prescrived that you got an infection in your eys. He gave some dedition and two eye drops and he said you have to put eye drops 4 times a day regularly. In additional, he recommaded to take some time off and to fall asleep earyer. And He said you'd better not drink anymore while you recover. I followed his advice well. And then I could cure later 3 weeks. After that, I decided to exercise regularly and make an effort to get in the bed eary everyday. Nowadays I am fine.
튜터 교정 답변

Actually, I'v been too busy to sleep. I worked like hell lately. And then I had too much eye pain a couple of weeks ago. So, I went to see an eye doctor. The doctor prescribed me that I got an infection in my eyes. He gave me some medication and two eye drops and he said that I have to put eye drops 4 times a day regularly. In addition, he recommended me to take some time off and to sleep early. And he said, "you'd better not drink anymore while you are recovering." I followed his advice well. And then I would feel better after 3 weeks. After that, I decided to exercise regularly and make an effort to get in bed early everyday. Nowadays, I am fine.

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