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작성자: 87316 담당 튜터: Sheryl
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Let me tell you about My favorite the blog. It is Cube blog. I began to make cube a couple years ago. However I couldn't make three-three cube myself. So I can find Cube blog. There are a lot of how to make cube. Such as manual, movie and explain about making cube. I did excise a lot for one month. At last I could perfactly make 3-3 Cube. So I taught my son how to make cube. My son could make cube more easy then me. I can recognize which is the bast product about cube. And if I have some qustions about how to make new cube, sometimes I ask the blog. Many people who is the blogs repeadly answer on my question. I can share my interesting through the blog. Also I can get a lot information.
튜터 교정 답변

Let me tell you about my favorite blog named Cube blog. I began to visit cube a couple of years ago. However, I couldn't make a three-three cube myself. So I found Cube blog. There are a lot of ways how to make cubes. Such as manuals, movies and explaination about making cubes. I did exercise a lot for one month. At last, I could perfactly make a 3-3 Cube. So I taught my son how to make cubes. My son could make cubes faster than me. I can recognize which is the bast product about cubes. And if I have some questions about how to make a new cube, sometimes I read the blog. Many people engaged on the blog repeatedly answer my questions. I can share my interesting experience through the blog. Also, I can get a lot of information.

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