Blog 3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As you might know, I really like to visit some blogs. Nowadays, most people have to get the imformation a lot if you want to begin new hobby. The best way to share impression each other is blogging.
However, 10 years ago, there are few useful blogs on the internat. Also the blogs couldn't be profesional. There are nothing various pictures, reports and so on. And at that time not only the blogs is not famous but also less visitor of the blogs. But many people gather some tips about trip from some blogs. Even people ask the blogs about nice restorant befor eat out. I think the blogs is part of our life.
However, 10 years ago, there are few useful blogs on the internat. Also the blogs couldn't be profesional. There are nothing various pictures, reports and so on. And at that time not only the blogs is not famous but also less visitor of the blogs. But many people gather some tips about trip from some blogs. Even people ask the blogs about nice restorant befor eat out. I think the blogs is part of our life.
튜터 교정 답변
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