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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 02. 03 조회 12889

Some excuses.

작성자: pos607883 담당 튜터: MaryJo1
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Compared to a month ago, there are lots of things to do that made me so busy and stressful.
I could accept every situation going around me.
Moreover,although I am not a kind of person who enjoys drinking
the fact that I try to relieve stress by drinking makes me feel bad.
(Does this sentence make sense?)

I know this can not be excuse of not studying English hard recently.
Although I had decided to check your comment everyday and write English as much as possible,
I couldn't keep doing it. However, from now on, I will try to do it.

Anyway, I sincerely appreciate you to care for me.
Even 10 mins of our class motivates me to want to be a better English speaker.
Thank you so much for being my English teacher.
튜터 교정 답변

Compared to a month ago, there are lots of things to do that make me so busy and stressful. I can accept every situation going around me. Moreover,although I am not a kind of person who enjoys drinking the fact that I try to relieve stress by drinking makes me feel bad. (Does this sentence make sense? It absolutely makes perfect sense) I know this should not be an excuse of for not studying English hard recently. Although I had decided to check your comments everyday and write English as much as possible, I couldn't keep doing it. However, from now on, I will try to do it. Anyway, I sincerely appreciate you to care your caring  about for me. Even 10 mins of our class motivates me to want to be a better English speaker. Thank you so much for being my English teacher.

What a great note and how gracious you are!  I think you have a lot on your plate these days.  I think you have hit the nail on the head when it comes to English, the more you put in, the  more you get out. I really enjoy talking to you and I will do everything I can to help you get to the level of English you want to achieve. Thank you for being so motivated.

See you soon

 

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