Some excuses.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Compared to a month ago, there are lots of things to do that made me so busy and stressful.
I could accept every situation going around me.
Moreover,although I am not a kind of person who enjoys drinking
the fact that I try to relieve stress by drinking makes me feel bad.
(Does this sentence make sense?)
I know this can not be excuse of not studying English hard recently.
Although I had decided to check your comment everyday and write English as much as possible,
I couldn't keep doing it. However, from now on, I will try to do it.
Anyway, I sincerely appreciate you to care for me.
Even 10 mins of our class motivates me to want to be a better English speaker.
Thank you so much for being my English teacher.
I could accept every situation going around me.
Moreover,although I am not a kind of person who enjoys drinking
the fact that I try to relieve stress by drinking makes me feel bad.
(Does this sentence make sense?)
I know this can not be excuse of not studying English hard recently.
Although I had decided to check your comment everyday and write English as much as possible,
I couldn't keep doing it. However, from now on, I will try to do it.
Anyway, I sincerely appreciate you to care for me.
Even 10 mins of our class motivates me to want to be a better English speaker.
Thank you so much for being my English teacher.
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