City 1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I live in Suwon city which is westen in Seoul in Korea. I moved from Busan to Suwon for my job for 10 years ago. Also I love city life. People say that there are too many people and cars. And there are so many things you can see old castles and so many apartments. I think Suwon is dynamic city. It is full of energy and active day and night. Suwon is known for HwaSung. It's designated as a UNESCO World Heritagesite. Suwon is large city among the city in korea. And Suwon's population is over a million. For the last ten years, Suwon has been a lot change. Such as population has been increased a lot and more active and a lot public transportion. Although I lived for 10 years. I love Suwon and I feel proud of Suwon.
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