City Life 2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
People in the city enjoy the culture and outdoor activity with family on the weekends. There are plenty of galleries, museums, places and parks. You can see movies or musicals. Suwon has a amazingly fastival named Suwon Hwaseong Cultual Fastival. These days, it is being held at Hwaseong castle. There are a lot events. Such as various eating, performances and some parades. It's super famous in my country. Many people take a picture with their family infront of nice place and spend happy time. Going to the movies is the best way to escape from the bustling city life. Comfortabe seats, sweet popcon and good movies take people's mind off stress even for a monent. In other word, people in the city try to escape from city life on the weekends.
튜터 교정 답변
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