Make a dialogue using "One"
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
<Dialogue No.1>
Cho : Hi There! How is it going these days?
James : Hi, Cho. It has been a long time. So far so good. And you?
Cho. Me too, However, I'm concered about my car. I would like to sell my old car and buy a new "one".
Jmaes: Oh my god, are you out of your mind? You bought your car only 5 months ago! You have to consider it again!
<Dialogue No.2>
James : Hi, Cho. What are you doing now?
Cho : Hi. I'm reparing computers in my team becasue the computers were affted by a certain virus and they are not working well.
Jmaes : There are so many "ones"! I think it will take long time for you to repair all of them.
Cho : Hi There! How is it going these days?
James : Hi, Cho. It has been a long time. So far so good. And you?
Cho. Me too, However, I'm concered about my car. I would like to sell my old car and buy a new "one".
Jmaes: Oh my god, are you out of your mind? You bought your car only 5 months ago! You have to consider it again!
<Dialogue No.2>
James : Hi, Cho. What are you doing now?
Cho : Hi. I'm reparing computers in my team becasue the computers were affted by a certain virus and they are not working well.
Jmaes : There are so many "ones"! I think it will take long time for you to repair all of them.
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