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Thank you teacker :)

작성자: 1101080369 담당 튜터: Ruzel
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Nice to meet you, Ruzel.

I hope to have a flaws-free conversation :(

haha. Saddly, It's too difficult to me.

I guess I need many many corrections from you :)

Good to see you. bye.
튜터 교정 답변

Nice to meet you, Ruzel. I hope to have a flaws-free conversation :( haha. Saddly, It's too difficult to me. I guess I need many many corrections from you :) Good to see you. bye.

CORRECTION:

I hope to have a flaws-free conversation :( 

-> I hope to have a good flow of conversation with you.

Saddly, It's too difficult to me.

-> Saddly, It is too difficult for me.

 I guess I need many many corrections from you.

-> I guess I need many many corrections from you.

bye.

-> Bye

 

COMMENTS:

Hi Daniel, It was nice to meet you too. I enjoyed talking with you too. I also hope to have a good flow of conversation with you.

It's okay we still have a lot of time to talk you can express whatever you want to say. You do not have to worry because I am here to rephrase and correct

your sentences. Just feel comfortalble with me. 

Anyways if you want to send personal messages you can write in message inbox and if you want me to correct your writing you can write it

in composition correction like this one. 

Thank you for writing and have a nice day!~ Teacher Ruzel^^

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