City Life 3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Actually, I went to see a movie called Himalaya with my wife last Saturday.
The movie theater is named CGV and the nearist the place from my house. It takes 5 minustes on foot from my place. Also the theater is pretty a good place and very famous in my country. I saw the movie early morning. It's the best way to get discount of ticket. We arrived at the theater an hour befor the show. We bought some popcoms and two sodas from snak bar. Himalaya hit over million and it was real story. Mr. Whang stared in this movie. He was very famous movie star. The movie lasted for nearly three hours, but we got never board. It was blew me away. Lately I've been too busy to sleep. So I didn't hang out with my wife. I was very glad that my wife was so happy.
The movie theater is named CGV and the nearist the place from my house. It takes 5 minustes on foot from my place. Also the theater is pretty a good place and very famous in my country. I saw the movie early morning. It's the best way to get discount of ticket. We arrived at the theater an hour befor the show. We bought some popcoms and two sodas from snak bar. Himalaya hit over million and it was real story. Mr. Whang stared in this movie. He was very famous movie star. The movie lasted for nearly three hours, but we got never board. It was blew me away. Lately I've been too busy to sleep. So I didn't hang out with my wife. I was very glad that my wife was so happy.
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